Friday, January 13, 2017
Someone
Ext. Night
I man is walking down a dark alley alone. He hears the sound of glass breaking and turns around fast. He starts to run, going faster and faster with each step. His is breathing gets heavier and heavier, he came to an immediate halt. There is a figure in front of him, but he can't tell who or what it is. He turns and runs as fast as he has ever run. He runs into a dark building. He leans against something to catch his breath. Next thing he knows, the figure is in front of him. He knows who it is. He asks why, why this is happening, why me? The room is lit by a blinding light. He slowly opens his eyes and he sees clouds everywhere and everything is white.
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I like how you walk the reader through this story with descriptive words. I also like your use of vivid imagery.
ReplyDeleteThis paragraph gave me goosebumps. The wording and imagery you created was amazing and the suspense as well. Great job Ellen!
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